I released a small Twine game, the Passing of Autumn, an adaptation of a short story I wrote 20 years ago, and this is the feedback I've gotten so far:
➕ evocative description
➕ interesting setting
➕ well adapted to interactivity
➖ too long
➖ too repetitive if you want to replay
➖ not enough background on the dyad
I will keep these in mind for the future!
Edited 145d ago